| "I come from a place where breath, eyes and memory are one, a place from which
you carry your past like the hair on your head. Where women return to their
children as butterflies or as tears in the eyes of the statues that their
daughters pray to." The place is Haiti and the speaker is Sophie, the heroine of
Edwidge Danticat's novel, "Breath, Eyes, Memory." Like her protagonist, Danticat
is also Haitian; like her, she was raised in Haiti by an aunt until she came to
the United States at age 12. Indeed, in her short stories, Danticat has often
drawn on her background to fund her fiction, and she continues to do so in her
debut novel.
The story begins in Haiti, on Mother's Day, when young Sophie discovers that
she is about to leave the only home she has ever known with her Tante Atie in
Croix-des-Rosets, Haiti, to go live with her mother in New York City. These
early chapters in Haiti are lovely, subtly evoking the tender, painful
relationship between the motherless child and the childless woman who feels
honor bound to guard the natural mother's rights to the girl's affections above
her own. Presented with a Mother's Day card, Tante Atie responds: "'It is for a
mother, your mother.' She motioned me away with a wave of her hand. 'When it is
Aunt's Day, you can make me one.'" Danticat also uses these pages to limn a
vibrant portrait of life in Haiti from the cups of ginger tea and baskets of
cassava bread served at community potlucks to the folk tales of a "people in
Guinea who carry the sky on their heads."
With Sophie's transition from a fairly happy existence with her aunt and
grandmother in rural Haiti to life in New York with a mother she has never seen,
Danticat's roots as a short-story writer become more evident; "Breath, Eyes,
Memory" begins to read more like a collection of connected stories than a
seamlessly evolved novel. In a couple of short chapters, Sophie arrives in New
York, meets her mother, makes the acquaintance of her mother's new boyfriend,
Marc, and discovers that she was the product of a rape when her mother was a
teenager in Haiti. The novel then jumps several years ahead to Sophie's
graduation from high school and her infatuation with an older man who lives next
door. Unfortunately, this is also the point in the novel where Danticat begins
to lay her themes on with a trowel instead of a brush: Sophie's mother becomes
obsessed with protecting her daughter's virginity, going so far as to administer
physical "tests" on a regular basis--testing which leads eventually to a rift in
their relationship and to Sophie's struggle with her own sexuality. Soon the
litany of victimization is flying thick and fast: female genital mutilation,
incest, rape, frigidity, breast cancer, and abortion are the issues that arise
in the final third of the novel, eventually drowning both fine writing and
perceptive characterization under a deluge of angst.
Still, there is much to admire about "Breath, Eyes, Memory," and if at times
the plot becomes overheated, Danticat's lyrical, vivid prose offers some real
delight. If nothing else, this novel is sure to entice readers to look for
Danticat's short stories--and possibly to sample other fiction from the West
Indies as well. --Alix Wilber |